A good days work I feel.
First blog. This is what I pretty much did with my day.
Character Profile
Derek the Plumber with his accomplice Ronnie the Radiator fight crime as they roam the streets of Peckham in the 1940’s. Ronnie is a transformable radiator and can transfer from being wall-attached to being portable.
Derek the Plumber would be lost without Ronnie the Radiator and vice versa.
Derek lives in a world of Crime and Poverty in the mid 1980’s, the fact there is no belief or religion and religion ceases to exist has made the 10 commandments (DARWINISM) (it never happened) non-existent means that no laws could of been derived from these scriptures or testimonials.
It is a free-for-all and anyone can do anything.
However Derek the Plumber and Ronnie the Radiator are singled out of the world mass as wanting to escape this recklessness.
Outcome of the Story
Outcome of the Story
Hero’s Journey that doesn’t have a happy ending. Derek fought for more than 50 years for the rights and laws for all man. But after recruiting a sheer minority. He dies of old age and the world continues to rampage onward.
The extract:
Derek is running towards the city centre, as fast as he can.
A little child has been stolen from the shopping centre and only Derek and Ronnie the Radiator can save the day.
They see the perpetrator with the child in question and proceed to tackle the crime
“Hurry Ronnie, we’re losing heat.” Derek yells the Ronnie the Radiator that is trailing behind.
The chase continues as they follow the kidnapper up a long and winding path, engaging in the battle of throwing plungers and monkey wrenches. There’s a broken bridge at the summit of this winding road and the young child is in grave danger.
“So, we meet again Derek the Plumber.” in an eerily annoying voice, we recognize that it is Derek’s nemesis - Jacob the Taxman.
“Jacob the Taxman, I should’ve guessed.” says Derek. Ronnie the Radiator makes the first move toward the Taxman.
“ONE MORE move from that stupid Radiator and the girl gets it” violently screams Jacob the Taxman.
“Where is the money you owe me, for this business period?” Jacob the Taxman angrily asks.
“I’m pretty sure my accountant has dealt this matter with you, Jacob - just let the girl go”
replies Derek.
The poor girl is near death and the conversation continues late into the night over the discussion of Premium Bonds, risky financial business and the safe return of Derek’s forms to avoid repossession of his assets.
DIG DEEP!
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